[Original] Today is snowy. [Better] It is snowy today. [Original] no [Better] not yet. [Original] Chelsea make a order. [Better] Chelsea is making her order. [Original] I'm also drink coffee with sugar. [Better] I also drink coffee with sugar. [Original] She's afraid that she's full. [Better] She's afraid that she might be full. [VOCABULARY] 1. hold off - delay something 2. hangover - a feeling ..
[Original] I was caring my daughter [Better] I was taking care of my daughter [Original] I'm in home in Friday night. [Better] I was at home on Friday night. [Original] It's name Chinese. [Better] It's a Chinese name. [Original] I always visit application before I went to restaurant. [Better] I always visit the application before I go to a restaurant. [Original] This application offer discount c..
[Original] I drink with my co-workers. [Better] I had some drinks with my co-workers. [Original] I highly recommend you to watch the movie. [Better] I highly recommend you to see a movie. [Original] You should try to remember this food name. [Better] You should try to remember the food's name. [Original] I've never been happier in my life. [Better] I've never been happy in my whole life.
[Original] My boss going to report CEO. [Better] My boss is going to report it to the CEO. [Original] My boss present it. [Better] My boss will present it. [Original] sometimes I prefer for my family or for my parents [Better] Sometimes I prefer to order on my own for my family and for my parents. [Original] I like all kind of food. [Better] I like all kinds of food. [Original] I'm not eat it's ..
[Original] I tried to log in on my phone. But, it doesn't work. [Better] I tried to log in on my phone. But, it didn't work. [Original] Yesterday, I am very busy. [Better] Yesterday, I was very busy. [Original] I forgot change this class. [Better] I forgot to change this class. [Original] I think in special day. [Better] I think it on a special day. [Original] end of the year many restaurants bu..
[Original] I'm answering the phone from wife. [Better] I was answering call from my wife. [Original] When she call me, I din't answer her phone. [Better] Whenever she calls me, I don't answer her call. [Original] She very angry. [Better] She is very angry. [Original] These day I'm very busy. [Better] I'm very busy these days. [Original] Do you have my tables available for 7 pm? [Better] Do you h..
[Original] I was trying to start new sports [Better] I tried to start a new sport. [Original] I had make register for exercise [Better] I registered for a screen golf lesson. [Original] Many people are learning golf. [Better] Many people are learning to play golf. [Original] There is no plan this week. [Better] I don't have any plan this week. [Original] I am not enough good skill [Better] I am ..
[Original] There's so many job in my new department [Better] There are so many works in my new department [Original] and go to company.... [Better] ...and I go to our company's cafeteria.. [Original] ...to touch in other people [Better] ...to touch base with other people [Original] ...most messages sent by my wife. [Better] ...most of messages I sent to my wife. [Original] when I buy a Iphone 3G..
[Original] I was getting so mad with my boss. [Better] I was getting mad at my boss. [Original] I was getting nervous whenever I got poor grade [Better] I was getting nervous whenever I get a poor grade [Original] Sorry, I've been transferring in another department, so I can't help you. [Better] Sorry I've been transferred to another department. So, I can't help you. [Original] We are think same..
[Original] I din't work late. [Better] I didn't work over time. [Original] She didn't answer to Rachel's call. [Better] She didn't answer Rachel's call. [Original] Rachel very happy the phone tag is over. [Better] Rachel is very happy that the phone tag is over. [Original] I call my relatives for a week [Better] I call my relatives every week [Original] How has your parents been doing lately [Be..